exdevlin (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} exdevlin) wrote in ravens_falling, |
Now that's amusement. *laughs*
In this line: "Her use of his name whipped the smile from his face as it he had been slapped." Did you mean wiped rather than whipped?
In this line: "Her use of his name whipped the smile from his face as it he had been slapped." Did you mean wiped rather than whipped?
